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An open notebook shows three versions of a sentence about putting down a cup, labeled “Slow,” “Steady,” and “Quick.” A teal pen and ceramic mug sit beside it on a sunlit wooden table.

A Sentence with Three Different Speeds

Change the pace of an ordinary sentence without changing its subject.

  • 5–15 minutes
  • No setup
  • Easy to pause
  • Seated friendly
  • No cleanup
  • Very low effort

What you need

Start with something plain, such as I put the cup on the table. You are playing with rhythm, not writing a polished story.

  • paper
  • pen

Make it

Start with something plain, such as I put the cup on the table. You are playing with rhythm, not writing a polished story.

  1. 1

    Write a hurried version using short words or clipped phrases.

  2. 2

    Write a lingering version that pauses over one small detail.

  3. 3

    Write an interrupted version with a dash, a break, or an unfinished thought. Read the three silently or aloud and notice their pace.

Short on energy? Write just a hurried version and a slow version.

A good place to stop: Three versions of one everyday action finish the experiment.

Make it work for you: Speak the versions instead of writing, or use dictation as an alternative supply route.

Another route: Keep the words the same and change only punctuation and line breaks.

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